tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-143485269626703118.post2793621271419347547..comments2024-03-29T03:44:12.622+11:00Comments on A peaceful day: Of InnovationsJeannehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09573473465011631325noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-143485269626703118.post-25873083178807909202015-03-17T08:05:30.894+11:002015-03-17T08:05:30.894+11:00Yes, she does an excellent paraphrase. You answere...Yes, she does an excellent paraphrase. You answered my question with " she had the original in front of her." Thanks! I appreciate all of your posting. My students are doing "Of Revenge." Ahab in Moby Dick is driven by revenge by a white whale that was very near your nation. Bonniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03944984613918619990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-143485269626703118.post-44664494666128345982015-03-17T07:40:10.079+11:002015-03-17T07:40:10.079+11:00Sorry, Bonnie, what do you mean?
She took the ori...Sorry, Bonnie, what do you mean?<br /> She took the original essay, read it a few times over a couple of weeks, and then rewrote it in her own words. She had the original in front of her - it is not a narration from memory. The idea is to help her make sense of the reading. I think she does amazingly well.Jeannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09573473465011631325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-143485269626703118.post-41862191411245316982015-03-17T00:15:10.057+11:002015-03-17T00:15:10.057+11:00When Jemimah wrote her paraphrase, did you look at...When Jemimah wrote her paraphrase, did you look at the essay? Or was this all from working with the rereadings? Bonniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03944984613918619990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-143485269626703118.post-81126486788618314082015-03-15T10:55:16.863+11:002015-03-15T10:55:16.863+11:00I am very inspired by these posts of Bacon! I am very inspired by these posts of Bacon! Bonniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03944984613918619990noreply@blogger.com